The Gambler

This is really nice - you've handled blank verse rather well. The way you write, though, suggests that you might do better at slightly more formal types of poetry - ...

This is very interesting, with some good ideas. :D The only problem I can see is that you can be a bit too clunky and awkward for something written in ...

You know my name... Reading this properly for the first time, this is damn good. There are some phrases in there that crack me up (the bag is catless now), ...

There are so many adaptations of the 3 Little Pigs story out there that it's quite nice to find one not trying to be hillariously satirical. You've got the style ...